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Monday, April 28, 2014

Literary Bullies - You Know Who They Are

    Since becoming a published author in July of 2013, I've become aware of a new kind of bully. A literary bully. Maybe they've always been around, but the internet has certainly made them more visible. As a kid you were pretty much guaranteed there would be schoolyard bullies, and as an adult you had about a 50% chance you'd have suffer with one in the workplace to some degree or another. What I didn't expect was the amount of literary bullies lurking in the literary world. I guess I shouldn't have been so surprised, after all, those schoolyard bullies were bound to become adults just as I did. Apparently many haven't changed much.
    I don't recall ever seeing the term literary bully before, and since I may be the first to coin it, let me give you my definition of it. A literary bully is someone who, like most bullies:
  • Believes, and wants you to believe, they are superior to you on whatever literary subject it is they are talking down to you about at the moment. They seem to get some sort of sick personal gratification by making you feel small and inferior compared to their vast knowledge of the subject being discussed at the time. They will constantly litter their posts with dry, bored words to let you know just how far down their nose they are having to look just to see you.
  • Though a part of the Indie world, they assure you they wouldn't be caught dead reading an Indie book. Kinda gives you the sense that maybe one rejection letter too many from the Big 5 has truly made them bitter, or surely they wouldn't be a part of the industry they so obviously despise.
  • They criticize your book(s), or any part of it, in a manner that lets you know they could have done it better. After they rip you in every way possible, they'll then digress a bit once they've accomplished what they set out to do: completely undermine you confidence and enthusiasm. They'll assure that they didn't actually mean it that way, but... Of course, the damage has already been done.
    These people aren't the physical bullies we all recognize from our childhood. These are verbal bullies, and they're every bit as easy to recognize as the physical ones. Verbal bullies tear you down in order to make themselves look better. It is, in fact, the only way they can stand out in a crowd, and they know it. They usually can't shine on their own merit so they feel that eliminating others is the only way they can get the attention they think they deserve.
    We are Indie authors! We've entered this brave new world known as Indie Publishing and are all eager to make our mark. We will make our mistakes, and do our best to learn from them, but we will never give up!
    My advice to any one of you the next time you come across a literary bully? Tell them to piss off and shut them down. Shrinking away from people like this only makes them feel more empowered, but the fact is YOU are the one who has the power. Use it.
   

Friday, April 18, 2014

How Did I Ever Write Without This?

    Several months ago, I came across a program called Grammarly. I used the 7 day trial by running the first 3 chapters of my first book through it. Oh my... I was a little mortified to see all the errors it brought to my attention. It didn't just point out those pesky little it's or its usages, but overuse of particular words, and everything in between. Since I'm one of those stubborn authors that are determined to be completely self sufficient in every aspect of my work, I knew I had to have this program. It was like having a proofreader and editor at my beck and call 24/7 for a tiny fraction of the cost.
    Now that I have Grammarly, I run every chapter I write through it. I make the necessary corrections, and I'm done. Finished. No more going back over it and fretting. And most importantly, no more missing mistakes. As most of you know too well, after awhile you can no longer see the forest for the trees when reading your work for the 100th time. Grammarly never misses, though. I was practically giddy when I saw all that it was picking up on. Even as I laughed, I groaned to myself, "how on earth did I miss that?!" I don't worry about that anymore.
    As an official reviewer for Reader's Favorite, I read a good amount of books that are still in desperate need of a proofreader. I can't help but think if they had only put their book through Grammarly, pretty much all of those mistakes could have been taken care of. I highly recommend running a test for yourself, you won't believe what you see!

 
      As you can see on the right side of this screen shot, those are just a few of the things Grammarly searches your pages for. In the red highlighted area, Grammarly has brought to my attention the use of a double negative. This is one of those instances where you'll use your own judgment to correct it or leave it. Grammarly has pointed it out, but the program is unaware that the man speaking that sentence has a hillbilly accent and his dialogue is often over dramatized by using such words. All I need to do is hit the Ignore button and it moves to the next thing on the list. It just couldn't be simpler.
    Click the link below to give it a try, you can test it free for 7 days! I know I won't ever publish another book again without running it through Grammarly first, and plan on putting the two books I have already published through it as soon as I can. It has made such a difference in the book I'm currently writing, and I've learned a lot just from using it.
  

 
 
 

Chameleon Author              

Monday, April 7, 2014

Is Your T.O.C. M.I.A.?

    I was in an informal roundtable discussion last week with a handful of authors and someone made a comment that they never put a table of contents in their digital books. I couldn't quite keep the surprise from my face fast enough. What ensued was an emotional debate on why any author should, or shouldn't, include a ToC in their digital book.
    I think the fact that numerous retailers like Barnes and Noble and Apple will not include your book in their catalogue if it doesn't have a ToC is reason enough to put one in it. Why would you lock yourself out of reaching millions of additional readers? When I asked the four authors who admitted they didn't bother with a ToC that very question, I got a lot of shrugs and mumbling. Long story short, what I finally found out was that it was too complicated and they simply couldn't get it to work right.
    Admittedly, it can be pretty confusing. The dreaded Meat grinder used by Smashwords is enough to make most authors avoid it all together, and the instructions Amazon gives leaves most aggravated and confused. Just 2 days ago I came across an author friend that didn't have a ToC in his book on Amazon. Shocked, I offered to do this for him. Once I got my hands on his .doc file, it was obvious why he didn't.
    Using Jutoh to do his book, the program was set for automatic format. It was a tangled mess of formatting marks that were so terribly unnecessary. What should have taken me an hour to do, turned out to be 11 hours spent stripping the formatting out, then reformatting it just so I could get the ToC to work. However, his book now looks like a million bucks on Amazon, and he's tickled pink. It was worth it :)
    In light of my experience, I wondered how wide spread this problem was. So far, it looks like about 1 out of 5 authors shy away from using ToCs, and another 1 out of about 8 that have one, it doesn't work properly. These are not hard stats, just a rough estimate on my part from asking around.
    I'd like to run an informal survey. Please scroll down and take this poll. I'll post the results at the close of the poll.
    If you need ToC formatting, or eBook formatting for upload to Smashwords and Amazon, you can contact me at Chameleon-author@live.com 

Chameleon Author               www.chameleon-author.com

Saturday, March 22, 2014

Author Showcase: Ginger Gelsheimer and Christina Keats


    Quest of the Hybrid by Ginger Gelsheimer and Christina Keats is the first book in the Aurora Conspiracy Trilogy. Nineteen-year-old Jesse and her older brother James are living on their family farm in Aurora, Texas. Haunted by the disappearance of her mother years ago into the windmill that stands on the property, the very windmill where an alien spaceship crashed in the late 1800s, Jesse is determined to find her mother. Even though she has her mother's journal, she's not sure where to start until she finds what appears to be a crystal key among the things left behind by her mother. Enlisting the help of Marcus, the pilot of a crop duster plane, and a good friend of her and her brother, they end up flying into a portal to another dimension, leaving James behind, completely baffled. From here the story sweeps you away into the Bermuda Triangle, Atlantis, the Pyramids, and an unknown mysterious planet. From alien spaceships to the aliens themselves, Jesse is surprised and amazed at every turn, but this spunky adept young woman has an even bigger surprise ahead of her, one not even she could have imagined.
    Quest of the Hybrid is a wild and entertaining read. Already aware of the spaceship crash that was reported to have happened in Aurora, Texas in 1897, I was eager to see how these authors wove fact with fiction in this story. I think they did a great job! The characters are believable, and the descriptive text was kept to a minimum in places it needed to be, yet the back story was given when necessary. As I read, I had no problem envisioning the sweeping scenes laid out by the authors, as well as some of the technology Jesse encountered. I would definitely recommend this book to young and old alike, and I look forward to reading the next book in this trilogy. Reviewed by Chameleon (B.G.) for Reader's Favorite

Q. Ginger and Christina, thanks for joining me here! The way the two of you came together as a writing team amazes me. It made me feel like you two were destined to be a writing team. Can you tell the readers about it?

Ginger - Christina and I were young college grads brought together by a temp agency that stuffed the local telecommunications company, Quest Communications, like sardines with people our age. We became friends right away and have been for almost 20 years. Living on opposite ends of the country, we made an effort to see each other, which wasn’t hard given she’s in Colorado and I’m in Florida - we’re always vacationing. We’ve been through marriage, babies, careers and all tons of other stuff! We’ve shared highs and lows and we’ve always stuck together. We love to shake a room with the fun energy we project.

Christina - I do feel destiny comes into play with things like this. When I came into my wonderful post-grad telecommunications (temporary) career I made many new and great friends and one of them was Ginger. One of the things that has always fueled my friendship with Ginger was our common drive and unstoppable hunger for the bigger things in life. Not bigger and better in a materialistic kind of way, but the fuller life experience we share with only certain people in our lives. No matter the highs and lows we experience at any given time, our beliefs in “going for it” never dies. We’ve been through a pretty good gamut of life events (and then some) and our drive and friendship remains a constant. Our dreams are big and our imaginations are even bigger. Finding this common outlet through writing made complete sense!

Q. That's amazing, but I can't honestly imagine trying to collaborate on a book with someone that lives 1600 miles away, that really takes some serious thought syncing, yet you've proven time and again that it works beautifully for you both. What's the secret?

Ginger - Obviously, technology has made it much easier because we can hold video calls in Google Hangouts. It’s almost like we are in the same room. But also, it takes staying engaged with the project. When you have to read and reread a story hundreds of times, it better be interesting! And even more so because we have a series and trilogy, so we have to make sure we never conflict, or create a box we can’t get out of down the road.

...oh, and then there’s Aurelius-the muse, who is very LOUD! He doesn’t like his story sitting cold for too long, there’s way too much to tell.

Christina -The one thing Ginger and I had going for us on the tele-writing was that we knew each other so well in both work and play. We do see each other more often than it might seem and both of those things were factors whenever we were together. Writing was a natural expression for both of us and that partnership, matched with our shared creative ambitions, was bound to happen. It also helps that we both are extremely in touch with the energies that come our way. When Aurelius came knocking we were quick to respond and build that relationship with him and all that came with it!

Q. Quest of the Hybrid wasn't just a fun fanciful tale for me. Because it was based on a true event and spun off from there, it changed the way I saw it. Tell me what actually got this series going for you both.

Ginger - It was one of our “make sure to stay friends by seeing each other frequently” visits when we accidentally came up with the Aurora Conspiracy project. We had no idea it would lead to something we will probably work on for a decade. It’s amazing what happens when you add a little vino to the moment. One minute we’re watching Ancient Aliens about a spaceship crash in Aurora, Texas in 1897 with so many unexplained bits of evidence, how could it not have happened? And then what if he lived? ...and the next minute, Aurelius was born. Now he rents space in our heads and is “high-maintenance” demanding that his story gets out.

Christina - A typical and regular visit in Colorado with my good friend, some good wine and good chatter left us yearning for more...a norm for us. As we settled into the alien TV shows that have always peaked our interest and it was as if a direct message flew in and plopped right down beside us. The sunny and relaxing evening turned into a high-energy night with high-speed momentum. A no less than perfect scenario for the two of us. We thought, why do we, as people, simply accept the truths fed to us on a daily basis without even a small inkling to seek out the real truth? Truth may be in the eye of the beholder, yes, but it also has a chance to make sense. Our novel(s) is that truth and holds the story that comes with it. As you follow history, this is what happened. Are people open to see that?

Q. I would bet there are more than enough that are. I've heard more than a few people say that they thought this storyline would make a great T.V. series, or movie. That would be an exciting direction to take your creations, I would think.

Ginger - We have had initial interest, in fact, we originally started with a screenplay and were asked to convert the script into a novel trilogy. Write the book to build support for the movie. Write the series to build support for the book. We’ve spent so much time with Jesse, Aurelius, Emily and Syrius that these characters have truly come to life for us...and they always step in s*@t! We have to know what they are doing next.

Christina - Well, the carefully-stated interest can be exciting to think about although what it really does for us personally is continually take us back to that first thought of it all and when Aurelius sought us out. It reminds us that this story is actually something. Getting to know these characters as they continually unfold has built a new world around us and we are in contact with it on a daily basis. Sure, it give us a feel good that they have a future with possibilities but where that takes us (to a bookshelf or beyond) is yet to be seen. For now, our loyalties lie with the story itself.

Q. Yes, first things first, for sure, but do you already have the manuscript written, or just the layout?

Ginger - We have the old version written, which means we have to pretty much start over.

Christina - The screenplay was the initial focus. We did complete round one on that and it did generate interest, however, now the request of books has taken us beyond that first expression of the story. We will be revisiting that part of the project as it comes back around, which in the big picture, may not be that far off.

Q. While you're waiting for that possibility, what is it that you're working on now?

Ginger - We are working on Book 2 of the Aurora Conspiracy trilogy and episodes 5 & 6 for the prequel series. I am also about to release episode 4 of The Dark Days series that I write with my daughter, Taylor. I’m also excited to be working on a script for an independent film that has to do with karma...that’s all I’m sayin’!

Christina - Two more books on Aurora and the remaining episodes are sitting right here but there is more outside of that. I do have some other projects that will be getting more attention over time for sure. One involves the younger readers of today and how they can be even more involved in the world of writing, reading and sharing. I have a big interest in this. On the other side of the spectrum, I’ve got a very in-depth story unfolding as we speak where tragedy may just meet up with humor when all is said and done. One thing is for sure...the engines are running and I can say with full confidence that there are crazy stories just waiting to come out...for both of us!

Q. Wow, sounds like you both have enough projects to last you a lifetime! If this series ever is wrapped up, what projects do you have in mind for the future?

Ginger - I don’t think this series is going to be wrapped up for awhile. We have both a future and a past to tell.

Christina - You know, this project is bigger than ‘a book’ and is our primary focus in the immediate future. Having said that though, there is always more going on in the wings and I can’t see either one of us putting an end to forward movement on any of our writing, anytime soon. Aside from this project, we both have many good stories to tell whether individually and together, the team holds strong and you just never know!

Chameleon: Any parting comments you'd like to leave my readers with?

Ginger - I would like to thank all of you for supporting the writers that you read. All of us start out the same-a shining thought or idea that just chips away and demands to be written down, remembered and shared. We never know if someone else will care to enjoy our story, but we have to at least create that opportunity.

Christina - Well, it’s funny that with this project we’ve said “join the journey” because it pertains to our story. But it really kind of sums it up for me all around. Expression (through writing) is a journey in itself. It think it’s pure awesomeness to share this journey with other writers. There is a great energy in that. We all have our stories and tales and through the work we do and in good times and bad, the support helps keep us going. As a parting comment, I’d say keep it together and stay together. We can all help each other so that we don’t fall off during any hard times because to have such strong feelings about a story, it only feels right to give it a real chance to be told. It truly is an amazing journey.

Thank you both for an amazing interview, and great encouragement. I wish you both the greatest success!